Try another version of the verse that locks to kick and snare.
Fully lock in chorus and bridge.
Go back to new chorus locking part after final chorus breakdown.
Lower final chorus breakdown dynamics and only play the double A on the first one and let it ring.
Alcan Closer Drafts
Intro 👍
Verse: more consistency in alternating parts, use of fills at changes/more excitement to fills.
Chorus: more motion, maybe walk all beats after each new root.
Bridge:A chords at breakdown have wrong root. More motion in second half heading to chorus.
Overall: dynamics. Quiet (piano) in intro and early bridge, medium in verse (mezzo forte), loud in chorus (forte), crescendo on Bdim in intro and bridge (gradually get louder).
Alcan Highway
Intro legato, slides, bdim walk.
Verse follow the chords roots to start.
Chorus follow the roots.
Only hang on chordal tones, keep passing tones 2,4,6, brief.
Live Fire Practice!
Staying Neutral
Work on on four fret exercise, first going down, then going up. Call out and sing note names as you go.
Go slow, focus on quality first in all that you do.
Keep dialogue with hands going.
Triplets
Work from 27 on.
Think about groove/swing/feel of patterns.
Careful with new time signatures!
Picky Picking
Practice alternating picking with steady 8th notes.
Work on angle of approach of pick for both up and down strokes.
Move on to exercise 7 and up. (Cover up tab, it’ll help!)
Guitar?
Work on guitar chords d, g, c.