Alcan Closer Drafts

  1. Intro 👍

  2. Verse: more consistency in alternating parts, use of fills at changes/more excitement to fills.

  3. Chorus: more motion, maybe walk all beats after each new root.

  4. Bridge:A chords at breakdown have wrong root. More motion in second half heading to chorus.

  5. Overall: dynamics. Quiet (piano) in intro and early bridge, medium in verse (mezzo forte), loud in chorus (forte), crescendo on Bdim in intro and bridge (gradually get louder).

Nick DeArmon